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Taking A Bite Out Of Crime

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Little Timmy love the idea of fighting crime
catching the bad guys to serve time.
Ready to shoot them dead with his cap gun
ending their law breaking his idea of fun.

He heard the butcher got robbed while he was at play
they stole the sausages that eating always made his day.
So he decided was time for him and Fido to solve the case
no way he was going to let them steal that favorite taste.

Tracking down the meanies meant using a disguise
one that would be clever, believable and so wise.
So he dressed his pooch to pretend to be a robber
and lure out the bad guys who he would thus clobber.

Figured sending his masked dog into another butcher store
with a note demanding sausages galore,
was the perfect idea to make them evil dudes come looking for more,
watching for them while pet pushed his way through the shop door.

Store owner read the note and ended up calling the cops
taking off the bag and slapping a muzzle on doggie's chops.

Wasn't quite what Timmy expected from his plot's treat
thought at least he would get a reward of sausages to eat.
Police following Fido's tag back to his address on the street,
pet released to parents, boy grounded from walking alone on concrete.

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I am an adult in years, but not sure I ever grew up

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  • PoetryPuppy
    September 8, 2008
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    thank you for your cute entry, love Kiarna


  • daviscth silver member
    September 5, 2008

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    I'm so glad I got to read this my friend. You did such a great job with this picture prompt. Looks like another gold coming your way.


  • Confusedboy
    September 1, 2008

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    hahaha, A bite out of crime, huh? Got nailed and cuffed and rebuffed, and thats enuff. Thanks for the laugh, mde myevening. Enjoyable.


  • trekkergirl
    September 1, 2008

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    This is so cute. Made me smile. I can see a child thinking just like that. Good job. Good write. An enjoyable read.


  • StarEyes
    September 1, 2008

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    Who says we have to grow up? I refuse to grow up! That is why all my boys are taller than me This is great! What a fun and wonderful read! I love it!

    Best of luck in this contest my brother!

    and love

    Nyetta

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