i left something
in the dark between
my fingers and you,
the beat.beat.beating
of january moons.
and now,
you are
bleeding my lungs
to exhaustion.
Author notes
yes.
25 words.
A contest entry
- 25 Words of Wonder by xxRainbowDawnxx.
525 points, ended September 4, 2008, 23 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Congratulations, Poet.
A Silver Sorrow
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very beautiful.
heart wrenching, relatable and kind of kills a part of my heart and soul.
I think I feel the pain, but I don't know why. -
let go and breaaaaaaaathe. :]
[i sound like a yoga instructor. forgive me.]
oh, and enter my contest, because you're amazing like that.
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i had an epiphany, of sorts.
i can breathe again.
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