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This Time

I wish that I could hate you,
Its not just the way that I despise you that keeps me feeling this way,
But life has its own funny ways of coming around to bite you,
Tomorrow just wont be the same and I so afraid,
That this is going to have to end the same way,
There you were looking down at me,
When all I really wanted was you to stand beside me,
And even when I'm dead theres nothing more to dread,
For me time can only tell,
Like the small traces of the evidence you spill,
I wont forget to remember,
But when it comes to december I just might forget about you.
Just the way you forgot to come closer,
When I was lonely and fading away into the dark and the night into the sky.
I wont ever let go but just want you to know that I wont forget,
And I probably wont forgive you this time....

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  • endless-lover silver member
    September 20, 2008
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    wow doll.

    intense[?]
    i loved it much
    hope your ok
    miss you

    <3


  • Nicada silver member
    September 1, 2008

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    Oh hun, I feel for you, and am not sure what you are dealing with, but my heart is with you. I am here to talk if you need to. Keep writing, as you know it can help so much with the healing process. This poem is so full of pain but it is great that you can release some of that terrible hurt onto paper. You may want to change your background or your font as the poem cannot be seen as it is. Love you and blessings, Mom