The heart lights up
the inside views
of memories
in rainbow hues
with sweet longing
bending near
a drop in time
spreads out in
tear
Author notes
A contest entry for: 25 Words of Wonder.
Picture: "Tear Drop Blues" By kosmikkreeper.
Courtesy: msn Live Search.
A contest entry
- 25 Words of Wonder by xxRainbowDawnxx.
525 points, ended September 4, 2008, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congratulations on earning the Bronze Cup!
What a wonder of words. I love brevity that speaks volumes. This is yet another great work of poetry. I hope you don't mind that I place you on my favorite's list.
Be Blessed ♥
Renee
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This is lovely.
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I love you word choice! Short, sweet, simple.
Beautiful! Master piece of its own. lol
xoxoxKatieoxox
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pretty choice of words...very creative and I like the rhyme, sometimes hard to do in short pieces.
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Short, but yet sooo very lovely and highly, highly lyrical for such an abrieviated poem. I loved it though, a fine, fine piece! bravo...
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people always say great things come in small packages, this isn't really a package haha
but it's lovely :]
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That's very lovely. Good luck in your contest and happy trails
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wow..so tiny yet soo beautiful...totaly full of meaning..ur one of ma favs !!!!! =D .....good work poet !!
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