And so...
YOU think you have the upper hand
bruising my p s y c h e
with illusions
of grandiosity
Even in your pitiful state
your pretense
has me laughing OUT LOUD
[almost to the point of wet panties]
because who would have thought
you even had the gall or balls
to stand up to a woman
you know has the ability
to knock you on your ass
without putting her hands on ya
I came to the conclusion
that many years
were wasted
with you
as my mate
I debated this thought for YEARS
and today
is the day
of my reckoning
I am on the road to freedom
(though rocks get in my shoes)
taking off
with jet stream propulsion
Glad we didn't replenish the Earth
with your sickening seed
rotten to the CORE
After all, you have
more than enough seedlings
growing wild
because
you are
absent
from their lives
Then again
maybe they are far better off
I would have been
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And the lady shall rise up as you fall to your knees
Thinking twice is something manyshould do often before trying one more time the trick they think are so cute to their mates oa the ones the say they lovee.
One blow above the knees one would think should bring aenogh fear to keep anyone in line if the lady has been pushed beyond the limits. Charger beware
when you have her furry in the air...mac
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Wow I find this really emotional indeed!
Very powerful and you expressed yourself
well here and in view this piece is well
worthy of being a masterpiece indeed!,Hazel
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Wow Grams. Very intense and heart-wrenching.
Love you
Lil
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Love you, sis.
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i've been on that road since 96. i feel ya. good display of emotions.
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chow bello!
That's right my sister tell him where to go and what he can with it when gets there! hey I know a good 'Sister' telling off when I see one afterall!
excellent!
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Wow! Very powerful. I can feel the anger and strength in your voice and your conviction. Wonderfully well written. Bravo!
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That's efffective
Can relate to this write
you may want to correct 'growing wild'
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