It's bad enough you fill my head
Why do you fill my heart, too
I guess I can't get over you
Even if I try to convince myself
It was painful when you weren't around
Will I heal when I see you again
Or will you go back to acting
Indifferent to my agony
It's hard enough to keep it cool
Why do you make my face heat up
I can't be very cautious
If you make me clumsy
It makes me smile when I look back
Will the future be as wonderful
The past was full of hurt
But I've already moved past that
It's mixed up, how you make me feel
Why haven't I gotten over you
After all this time, I think I see
You never gave my heart back
I think it's funny how times have changed
How neither of us stopped caring
Even though we grew distant
Even though I buried the pain
It isn't fair, the hold you have
The power to speed up my heart
To send me floating or tumbling
Into Cloud Nine or utter misery
Author notes
Meh... I dunno. >.<
Does it flow well? Could you feel the emotion?
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i kind of agree with the person be fore me, something a is off about this, but it happens to us all, at least you can write. keep it flowing
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I dunno either
This one doesn't quite tinker with my heart as your last one... maybe because the imagery isn't as strong and potent? :S
I think I might be too critical because I expect someone of your talent to churn out top notch poems every time.
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The thing about my poems? Sometimes they're amazing. I surprise myself every blue moon or so.
But in other--more frequent--instances, they are simply a means for me to express myself... to rant, in a way.
This is one of those cases.
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