Audible breaths coalesce desire,
encapsulating fevered gratification.
Heartbeats intensify jumbled kaleidescope longing
mirroring need olive-pearlescent.
Quietness reverberates;
signifying transcending unity
vibrating within xanthous yawning zealotry.
Author notes
A-Z acrostic. Written for and while laying in bed next to my love.
A contest entry
- Complexity Exchanges by 2lullabyhaven.
700 points, ended September 6, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Because I have nothing else to do with these guys.
(And you, of course, deserve it.
)
Yink
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ha, well thanks... I think
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You should ALWAYS be thankful for what I do for you.
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Wonderfully elegant, thanks for your entry lol
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Thank you and I am thrilled that you appreciated it so.
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Hello SwtAsWine.
I have to admit after first reading it, I was unsure as to why there was so many 'big' words, but after reading the stipulations on the contest I can see why. The actual A-Z is impressive, have never come across that before, and neither have I come across "Xathane", I looked it up but no definition, what does it mean?
I wish you well in the contest you are in. My regards.
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Hi there.
I enjoy writing in form as it helps to direct my currently dormant muse. I have written a few acrostics in various fashion and enjoy the challenge. XYZ is always a bit challenging each time. I changed my "X" word again as I am not fully satisfied with the ending. "Xathane" was a typo and should have been xanthane which is a dye... Silly me. Thank you for reading and the well wishes.
Best regards to you as well.
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