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Ink Well

I pull the plug within my soul
to empty cobwebs that stain the flow
and there in feathered imagery
I catch an inkling of destiny











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A contest entry for: 25 Words of Wonder.

Picture: "Feathered Quill"
Courtesy of PhotoBucket.

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  • malmadre gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    Meaningful words, as we have found this place to spill all that is inside us. Well done!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    September 4, 2008
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    It's almost like the future being told, but through inkblots instead of tea leaves. Sweeet.

  • jadeangyal
    September 3, 2008

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    Wow! To "catch an inkling of destiny" while your soul is being drained...impressive imagery. There shouldn't be an apostrophe in "cobwebs." Nice poem.


    • LastWords
      September 3, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment and the apostrophe catastrophy Really!


  • Salt Therapy
    September 3, 2008

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    wow this is brilliant! good luck in the contest I am sure you will do greatly!! ~ Kerri

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