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When we returned to hell, 10 years ago



You found me
and raped me
and tore apart
my hymen,
my heart,
my hope -

            but I was seven then,
        and learnt a day too late
      how to kick you 'til you bruised.

Your voice calls out
to a weakbitchslutwhore
and you know I'll answer.
I'll turn the other cheek.
Turn with my back against
a wall as cold as your hands
(as cold and grey as your heart)
as I built my own walls, then.
Fortresses of concrete and crap.
They repelled you as much as I did,
and you never thought that possible.

                                            And God, it feels so good
                                            to know I'll never be clean
                                            of the strength of you.



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Viva la vie boheme.

I don't know if this is what you're looking for, it just kinda came out.

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  • Kiss the girl--x
    September 5, 2008

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    this was really sad.

    ^^pointless comment....
    but I don't have much more to add...

    brilliant though[as always]


  • Mrs. Mautino
    September 2, 2008
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    So personal, I could feel it and can relate to it.
    I miss you and I hope all is well


  • StarEyes
    September 1, 2008

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    My Darling,

    What a powerful write this one is! You did a great job on it! I know how hard this was for you to write, but you captured the feelings really well! Great job darling!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    Ek is lief vir jou altyd

    Mom


  • aanika
    September 1, 2008
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    the emotion in this hit hard.
    beautiful, painful write.
    thank you for entering. (: