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Get it Yet?

my legs hurt
i just got done carving your initials
into my left thigh
and three cuts
into my right
and now you're saying
you still have feelings for her?
how, alex?
why, alex?
i don't wanna cry anymore
but the tears come anyways
but i don't let them fall
i grab them
and trap them
in a little box
buried deep inside
in that place i'll never let you see
[again]
i love you, alex
don't you get it yet?
i wish you would come back to town
so i could either
1. hit you
2. hold you
the third option will win out
[and behind dooor number three?]
my tears, alex
you cheated on me, didn't you?
when we were dating the first time?
and, to Aimee, i think you're a whore
if you did sleep with him
while he was mine
i think you're a bitch anyways
but now you're a bitchy whore
get it yet?
i hate you, aimee
and it's barely even your fault
blame alex
you're killing me, alex
and everyone knows it but you
are you fucking BLIND?
or just plain ignorant?
i wanted to be with you
more than anything in the world
more than i wanted to be alive
more than ANYTHING, alex!
do you get it yet?
i love you alex
but i doubt you understand the word {love}
oh, well
you're still mine
and that's what i asked for
wasn't it?
well, you know what they say
"be careful what you wish for
you might just get it"
but it's still what i want, alex
and it always will be
even if i find someone else
they won't be good as you

i love you, alex
get it now?

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  • Emm Jayy
    September 4, 2008
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    Holy fuck.

    Me gusta! Me gusta mucho!


  • XxDying InsidexX
    September 2, 2008

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    wow....uhm..not to sure what to say about that. i'm sure it probably doesn't help much but im here if you need to talk to me and i love you


  • Lexie
    September 1, 2008

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    wow, this poem is really deep. it was full of emotions. and a very dark side of love. great job. hope this isn't true, and if it is, find someone new, move on, and forget about him. you have a few scrambled letters though. lol, i do that a lot. great job!


    • Dirty and Broken
      September 1, 2008
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      thanks for the comment
      yeah, is true....but, oh well
      yeah, i'll fix the scrambled letters...thanks for terlling me! i probably wouldn't have noticed...

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