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Have you Really ever understood yourself?

Life is a journey of lessons
But we get lost in recess
on the way
Homework forgotten and neglected
far too much time
spent in play

We became followers and shirkers
Too lazy to put effort in
Where we could have made ourselves
brilliant
We just struggled with no depth within

Religion was made for the lazy
the ones who lost touch long ago
The Bible a book packed with lessons
that most of the world didn't know

A misunderstood work used in error
Wars caused through Man's ignorance
of the word
Left a world struggling in terror
long buried truth never heard

Religion was born out of fears
a lost time with nothing to hold
superstition was ripe and compelling
It caused man to become violent and bold

The truth is that man is but spirit
here on this earth as his school
a place where trial an error
have made religion the work of a fool

Spirit was given a place here
to have faith in a God it can trust
Believing in him is the answer
accepting this fact is a must

We need to get rid of religions
Cults that man now seeks for power
get back to the truth in our system
for this is the time and the hour

We have a mind so amazing
we can be anything that we think
without superstition and religion
our spirit fills with wisdom to the brink

Nothing holds back a true spirit
No religion or cult formed by man
Control by those people not Gods will
Certainly was not part of God's plan

Within us we hold all the power
That was given to us for our own
We just have to think it to receive it
The power of this not well known

Man may never learn his lessons
and have to return over again
but during the time of his schooling
he will have to start using his brain.









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  • angelica silver member
    September 3, 2008

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    My dear friend, you and I both know that we are spirit and do and be anything we set our mind to.
    Your poem is magnificently written explaining your views on religion. Good luck in the contest my dear friend.
    Love Joan


  • City-of-Angels
    September 1, 2008

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    Gave me chills start to finish! I'm not too big on rhyming, but you made it so subtle that it really worked. The ideas on this poem pretty much express mine at this moment. I feel like early man was just lonely (to be basic about it lol) and just made up something to prove that they weren't all alone in this world. Kind of how toddlers make up imaginary friends or something. I was raised a devout christian so you can imagine how my family feels about this
    OH an before I forget, please remember to put the option number in your Authors notes, even though I pretty much know what option you did. Rules are rules after all lol.
    Thanks for entering and good luck!