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Through the Fire

Through the fires & the flames of this Hell we thrive in…

I will thrive for you…with you…in you.

 

 

Do not fret my friend…my lover…my soldier…

For I am not the one condemning you.

 

I am not changing your fate…

 

I cannot save you…my darling…my sweet.

For I am not God…and cannot claim to be.

I am not God…

 

 

Good intentions sealed with poisonous kisses…

What a chaotic web we have weaved.

What a disastrous life we’ve lived…

 

 

Through the fire & the flames of this Hell we thrive in…

I will live by you…suffer by you…die by you.

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  • no-way-ap
    September 3, 2008

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    fave. :)

    cnat wait to see what other masterpeices you come up with. "I cannot save you…my darling…my sweet. For I am not God…and cannot claim to be.I am not God…"

    - that is absolutely how i feel in the situation i'm in right now. its unbelieveable.


  • cre8tiv-writer
    September 2, 2008
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    I love this!!! Great job!!!!


  • xMissHollie
    September 1, 2008
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    Yet again...wonderful!!
    Realllyyy lookin forward for more of your stuff to be put up =D

    xx