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A Loss Of Profit



Pretty little china doll
just a working class princess
nothing special
but pale ivory skin and raven hair
turning tricks for the tiny working men
that come marching by
with their day’s wages.

A leech on a street corner
looking slightly un-pretty
spreading her infirmity
to the interested passers by.

Victim of self inflicted circumstance,
poisoned,
by the loathsome dope
she buys every day.

Another hooker dies a paupers death
and once again no one cares
except her drug dealer
who mourns his good customer.


Author notes

Inspired by : http://cyril-helnwein.deviantart.com/art/Snow-White-the-Poison-Apple-70960956

This is the real Snow White, Walt Disney eat your heart out baby.

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  • Lady Michaella
    September 12, 2008

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    Wow, very deep and lovely. Though it is sick and strange, there is such beauty behind it... I congradulate you!
    Thanks for entering!
    -RoseDaughter-


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    September 1, 2008

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    This was a very interesting spin on the Snow White story. I loved the reference to the white snow of cocaine and how it can turn a princess into a pauper on the street corner. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz


    • howlinginpain
      September 1, 2008
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      Thanks Liz, I always appreciate your comments...they're just so thoughtful.

      Thanks again.