Juggernaut
spirals, takes hold,
penetrates with force,
the inner sanctum
of my mind.
Author notes
Picture Credit: http://bosniak.deviantart.com/art/Forever-Lost-54681896
In a list
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture VI by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended September 4, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Juggernaut
wow. this is awesome. the picture is kinda an illusion...lol. good luck in the contest!!! -slick99
*clappy 
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Thank you for reading my poetry. You take care and have a nice day.
Blessings,
Sandy
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Wow.
Emotionally heart-tugging and deeply expressed
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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Lovely Comment
Good Morning Sweet Amanda, Your comment is lovely and such a delight to read this morning. Hope you have the beautiful day you so deserve. Hugs and Smiles to you.
Blessings,
Sandy 
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a brilliant take on the promt so deep and powerful good luck in the contest
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Very Nice Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care.
Sandy
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Not bad
I just couldn't do more than look at the spiral going down...mac
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Thank you Mac!!!!!!!!
Always nice to get on in the morning and read your comments. Hugs and Smiles. Hope you are well today. Sending you many blessings and sunshine.
Take care,
Sandy
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Wonderful
Brilliant take on the prompt.
Your 13 words speaks volumes.
"inner sanctum
of my mind."
Awesome choice of words
Take care
Many blessings
David
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Wonderful Comment!!!!!!
Thank you dear David. I don't write too many short poems but this picture was very compelling. You take care. Hope all ois well down there.
Bless You My Friend,
Sandy
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so much said in thirteen words. The traveler holds on to the spirals of the mind. So much said in so few words.
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Wonderful Comment
Thank you Dan. I usually don't write dhort poems but I was drawn into the picture. Always a pleasure when you drop by. Take care.
Always,
Sandy
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