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That mean old dog!

My parent sand I work at a special bakery
It is called The Stakery!
It not only sells schnitzel and stake
But by a mistake
It sells sausage too!
so one day why serving our famous stew
A little dog came in
And he barked it his native tongue "THIS IS SIN!
I wait out side all day and night! eating everything left over!
Last night all there was a rotten clover!
I want some sausage and some stake!
For goodness sake!"
He barked and barked!
And then he parked
himself down in that seat!
"Some sausage please!" 

 


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Age 12!(Kid!)

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  • Autumn Rain13
    October 4, 2008
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    I like it, this poem is cute and funny...

  • PoetryPuppy
    September 8, 2008
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    thank you for your cute entry, love Kiarna


  • Medina Regal
    September 2, 2008

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    for the prompt id say it was good.
    a bit to mant exclamation marks.
    i couldnt make up anything with the prompt because it doesnt fit my style an mature sense of writing.

    i give props to you.