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Suicide

Missing image
Amber aura beckons toward infinity,
give up inhibitions-
leap into destiny's abyss.

A contest entry

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  • toomysterious
    September 2, 2008
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    Sad poem for such a pretty picture, but good, too. Good luck in your contest.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 2, 2008

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    I want to jump into the abyss
    Lovely!


    Thank You & Best of Luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • maralisa silver member
    September 2, 2008
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    a wonderful take on the promt full of some great imagery good luck in the contest

  • Broken-Bones
    September 1, 2008

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    I liked this a lot. I thought the second line was lovely because of the sense of freedom it captures. The third line was a bit more dark but I liked the image that you created. This was a nice take on the prompt. Great work x