I'd love to write a poem,
But there are feelings I can't express
It's not been the same since we broke up
Can you see why I'm getting so stressed?
I can't seem to pull it together,
'Cause my life is just such a mess,
And though we agreed that it was over,
There's one thing I must confess,
I miss every moment we shared together,
I'm sorry if you think I'm obsessed,
'Cause now I don’t feel as beautiful,
And now there’s no one to impress,
I know it's kind of obvious,
And I think that you might have guessed,
But if I heard you asking "Is it me?"
You'd hear me whispering "yes...”
Author notes
I wrote this one in like 5 minutes, I was dying to write a poem and I just couldn't bring myself to express anything. I have this kind of mental block recently, I know perfectly well what it is but.. Anyway, yeah, it's not that good, but I need to keep writing and trying to get myself into that mood. I don't really have a title either (Temp title).. Sorry, this one's definately not my best, hope it's not too much below expected standards.
Just a quick poem I wrote last night in like 5 minutes, so yes, I know there are many things wrong with it.
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This is a great write and I love it. Well done and im jealous for your ability to fire this off in 5 minutes.
As for the content, i'm sure you are beautiful, so don't worry about them.
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Aweee thanks so much! You made me smile like this
Hehe Thankyou so so much for your lovely comment!
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Well, for what it's worth I think this is fantastic! It's honest and soul-deep, which I just love, not being one for super-refined poetry, I can so totally relate to this on every level. Your lines flow together beautifully and I love the changes in rhyme that still manage to sound excellent together.
Thanks for sharing this,
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Awwee thankyou so much for your lovely comment!
Very appreciated
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