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Sail Away

I stand still and watch as
a new horizon hides my life;
mask of sheer depression steals my face.

Cube of isolation closes around my skin
and I shiver uncontrollably.
Stale tears flow from my dead eyes
as I painfully try to stand on battered feet.

Losing all sense of balance,
falling forwards...

                ... will anyone be there to catch me?


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Michaelbe

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  • spiritualangel
    September 5, 2008
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    Beautiful. Best of Luck.

  • maralisa silver member
    September 1, 2008
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    wow a powerful take on the promt full of some deep powerful emotion good luck in the contest