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It Was So Funny

People give me funny looks,
And their heads they just shook.
You know, you can stop and stare,
But what’s funny, I’ll never share.

If you took a look at the screen,
Most people would probably scream.
Blood falling down like rain,
And impossible-to-describe pain.

Their face scrunches up in disgust,
Doing this is a must.
Well, that is, except for me,
I just have to laugh with glee.

Stabbed, and stabbed, and stabbed some more,
There is just gore galore.
For some tears start falling down,
I’m just grinning like a clown.

As the bullet hits my skin,
As reality sinks in,
I have to do it one more time.
The last laugh is always mine.

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  • weallhaveissues
    September 4, 2008
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    i love how it is written. It flows really well.


  • EmeraldOblivion
    September 1, 2008

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    Awesome

    This piece is seriously awesome. I love the way it just expresses the isolation that some of us feel when we find certain things funny that others just understand... I love this.