I never liked shcllo,
It never dun me no good.
And havin to degram a sectance,
I never could understood.
And who ever com up with spellin,
nothin spells just like it should.
I’v hit the spel chk bittin om here,
but it don’t do no good.
Scholin didn’t help me none,
and evr teahcer was a snob.
I made it good on my on in life,
cause i'm good on my dish warshin job.
P.N.
Author notes
Knowing your education, and use of proper grammar and punctuation. I thought this would be appropriate. He he
Feel free to delete it my friend
A contest entry
- School Days, not a PIF by ecrivain01.
450 points, ended September 11, 2008, 9 entries
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LOL..I bet this actually took a lot of thought to write. This poem is really cute, and it made me laugh out loud. Thanks so much for that tonight. A very clever write indeed, with a strong message to stay in school. LOL... Great job! Blessings, Patty
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oops..guess i already commented..oh well..that was a year ago and it was even funnier this time...
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lol... This is actually very good and I would think hard to write. A good reminder to everyone why school is so important. Excellent.
Write on, poet.
blessings,
Myth
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This is good here hon this reminds me how my son writes! You know he writes like he's texting someone LOL!!! I'm like come on now!!! I enjoyed this thank you for your entry and good luck
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Ha! Ha! This poem is really cute, and is very cleverly written. Great job on this write, and great imagination. Blessings, Patty
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Funny! I liked the way you spelled or didn't spell as the case may be.
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Actually, it's rather clever.
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I loved the picture and it went so well with this poem. I also love how you wrote this. I actually know people who write this way. Sad isn't it. I understand tho. My grandfather taught himself to read from a newspaper and my mother never finished high school she finished 8th grade in a one room school where she learned only how to get into trouble.
My sister and I were one of the first of the grand kids to finish high school and go to college. My mom insisted that we finish High School. Her kids were going to be better educated than she was.
This was a very creative and interesting write. Good job!
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Thanks TGirl.. ecrivain has such a great vocabulary and the proper use of words. He should get a kick out of this.
But I don't think THIS meets his standards.. hehe
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