Li’l toy, can I play?
Would you like it if I stay?
Li’l toy, it’s your choice
If I’m happy for today.
A contest entry
- 25 Words of Wonder by xxRainbowDawnxx.
525 points, ended September 4, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I believe that this poem was great for the contest and you should've win
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Good use of the 25 words
and since you tagged this as "fantasy" and "love", I guess one could take this and interpret it in other ways as well -
Sweet write here
I like this very much
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short and sweet and the rhyme is great
nice poem
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short and simple and rymes well, i like it.
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Very true, life is what you make it.
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