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The Sea

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Come
down to the sea with me
let your toes touch the silky sand
feel the spray of life on your face

Come
slowly down through the flowered dunes
catch my hand as I lead you through
hear the wind as it hits the beach

Come
into the blue azure
ankle deep in salty foam
laugh at the sky and touch the clouds

Come
down to the sea.








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For my Sunshine.....come on....take my hand and let's go.....

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    Thank you ... thank you ... thank you

    I really can't say anymore, you made me smile and brightened my day and you know how much the sea means to me.
    Love always
    Suz
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  • Dalaney gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    any poem about the sea makes me breathless...i'm a beautiful shade of blue right now I love your poetry, Hilly. Lane