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What Did I Say Or Do??

Darling, I don't know what I said
I don't know what I did
You've locked me out of your heart
And the key you now have hid

Please tell what it is
What did I say or do
That you have closed the door
When you know I'll always love you

I'm giving you this rose
As a symbol of our love
Please unlock your heart
Wide open like the sky above

Let me enter into your heart
Warm and cozy like before
Because you see my darling
I'll love you forevermore

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    lovely sentiments expressed here, not certain that all the rhymes read like a natural coincidence, many have felt like this at one time or another, well wriiten highly relatable piece.