Under sun shining moonlight
Through a dark rainbow
Inside bloodless hearts and thoughtless minds
Draping over casket-ridden lives
...Are we even living at all?
Author notes
Just 25 words about things that are metaphorically impossible...
What is living exactly? What is the sun...the moon...are they just OBJECTS? Or ambiguous IDEAS? I just tried to question to validity of life in 25 words...it might not be exactly what you're looking for for the contest but...hopefully it opens some eyes.
I tried to describe each line as something that is cntradictory and "can't" technically happen...
What is living at all...?
Sigh...I don't even know...good luck to the others...
A contest entry
- 25 Words of Wonder by xxRainbowDawnxx.
525 points, ended September 4, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like how you deal with things that are not possible in this, the surrealistic sense is nice. I also like your question, are we really living and the answer is not one that any individual can answer. But, I doubt we are living to our full capacity.
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wow...thats so crazy and thought provoking!
Inside bloodless hearts and thoughtless minds
...i think if i had read that quickly, i wouldnt have even thought it was impossible...but it is...wow. amazing write, i love it!
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