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Waves Blue

Waves and swells
dancing the cool blue
fish scamper from the bait
as we vigilantly nuzzle
to the chilly breezes
over the massive
body of water
forever it swirls
meeting the shade of sky
holding many dreams

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kkatie55

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  • spiritualangel
    September 5, 2008
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    Beautiful. Best of Luck.


  • maralisa silver member
    September 1, 2008
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    a great take on the promt full of some great vivid imagery good luck in the contest