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Longing...

My longing to kiss
A rose so prickly.
Pain worse than this:
I’d go foolhardy!

Caress her while I sleep;
She pricks me really deep.

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  • Kal-El
    June 8
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    simply amazing


  • luna-midnight gold member
    September 27, 2008
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    awww, this is so wonderful, i really enjoyed it, good luck and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • Beauty Of Silence
    September 19, 2008
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    aww! this is so beautiful!


  • inspectorcliche
    September 6, 2008
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    love it!

    more often than not, love hurts..........


  • Ken-Maverick
    September 5, 2008

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    Thorns come with roses that just the way it is,
    well said here
    It short but says what needs to be said
    Welcome to the group
    All the best
    Ken


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    September 4, 2008

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    Oh I know how it is to be close to someone who seems to do more damage than good, but they still are the best thing in your eyes.


  • unavailable
    September 2, 2008
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    awww, so cute, I like this.

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