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Sinking (1)

Sinking...

I am sinking...

I will forever be.

Falling...

I am falling...

My sadness you can see.

Crumbling...

I am crumbling...

through the ground, i start to seep.

Dieing...

I am dieing...

Entering eternal sleep.

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Written January 18th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • darklatina
    January 19, 2004
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    oohh, wow, i love how you wrote this one. the style, i really love that. Great job!--Jessi