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Intense

Absorb me.
Encase my throbbing body within you.
Inhale my every breath,
Exhale when there's nothing left.
Lightly scathe your fingernails,
Across my weakened skin.
Apply impetuous pressure,
To stir massive eruptions within.
Feel the suffocating air,
Tighten around your throat.
And the feverish droplets of lust
On your vertebrae begin to float.
A rhythmic concoction of passion
Canvassing in all its asset.


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  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    I like this!

    And the feverish droplets of lust
    On your vertebrae begin to float.
    A rhythmic concoction of passion
    Canvassing in all its asset.