As her heart fades
with the crowding of tears down her face,
nothing can lift her
like the smile that flickers on her baby's lips.
Author notes
whilst waiting for the one she loves to return to her and although her heart is heavy, she smiles as her baby laughs and giggles. My daughter only 17 has some grown up problems to deal with, and i remember when she was a baby, she looked so delicate..... I just want her to know i love her and am very proud of the way she has handled things.......
A contest entry
- 25 Words of Wonder by Midnight-x-Rose.
525 points, ended September 4, 2008, 23 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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The most beautiful thing about having a child, is that they love you and you love them. That unconditional love is a blessing, no matter how hurt men have made you, or your own family. You have a new chance, a new begining if you will.
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your pride and your love come through loud and clear in these few words. I wish the both of you many smiles and happiness,
z
reenie
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I'm sure she knows...
for your feelings show
Wonderful Write, Poet!
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