I open this door to your heart
peek a boo
who are you going to become once I know you more?
will you be what I really thought you were?
or more, with deep secrets and deep thoughts that I hadn't expected
let's take on butterfly wings and find out
fly away into the sky
A contest entry
- Do What You Do Best by Errant Panther.
450 points, ended September 18, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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a very different take on this image but I like the childly innocence of just forgetting everything else for the chance to play or fly.
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pretty simple and to the point. I like the fact that you wrote down the thoughts that you have once setting eyes on the one you adore. great job of setting passion to the words you wrote.
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