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stranger

stop and listen
because this will only leave my mouth once
I thought I was in love
then I though what have I got myslef up into
Its a fact that you make my life complete
Im done with being up and down and turned around
you know that I'v had it
I feel like im in danger
you've turned into a stranger
I dont think im ready for it
my heart is beating out of my chest
and I think we need a rest
and I gotta get away from this stranger
before I hit danger
because Im not ready for it
step on the gas and floor it
and leave this stranger

Author notes

option number 9

this poem was written after the song " slow dance with a stranger" by danger radio, here are the offical lyrcis,


Lifeline
Call in the cavalry
Uh, tonight
You’re makin’ it so hard to breathe
Every time, you wrap your arms around me

Breakdown
Girl, you know I’m feelin’ you
There’s no sound
Except for when our bodies move
What have I got myself into?

Girl you make me feel like I’m walkin’ into danger
(mmm… but I don’t really care)
Girl I think I’m ready for a slow dance with a stranger
(And I want you to take me there)

mmm… I think I’m ready for it
Girl you know I can’t ignore it
Step on the gas let’s floor it
Everything you want and more, cause
Girl I think I’m ready for a slow dance with a stranger

Right now
My heart is beating out my chest
Goin’ down
Yeah I’m the one that does you best
Round and round
You’re makin’ me obsessed, got one request

Lay back
Let me take the driver’s seat
It’s a fact
That you make my life complete
I’ll attack
You’re every fantasy, baby

Girl you make me feel like I’m walkin’ into danger
(mmm… but I don’t really care)
Girl I think I’m ready for a slow dance with a stranger
(And I want you to take me there)

mmm… I think I’m ready for it
Girl you know I can’t ignore it
Step on the gas let’s floor it
Everything you want and more, cause
Girl I think I’m ready for a slow dance with a stranger

No I never saw it comin’
I should be up and running
Instead of walking right back into danger, danger, danger

But you can keep me up all night
Can’t let you out of my sight
I want another slow dance with a stranger, stranger, stranger

Girl you make me feel like I’m walkin’ into danger
(mmm… but I don’t really care)
Girl I think I’m ready for a slow dance with a stranger
(And I want you to take me there)

Girl you make me feel like I’m walkin’ into danger
(mmm… but I don’t really care)
Girl I think I’m ready for a slow dance with a stranger
(And I want you to take me there)

mmm… I think I’m ready for it
Girl you know I can’t ignore it
Step on the gas let’s floor it
Everything you want and more, cause
Girl I think I’m ready for a slow dance with a stranger

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  • Missa
    September 1, 2008

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    great. but the rhyming was a little confusing. at first it didn't seem like any rhyme, then you go on and rhyme every two lines. but still, very good.


  • Shades of Pale silver member
    September 1, 2008

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    hummmm

    i really don't know i sorta don't get it. can you help me i really do not get it! is it about one of your friends becomeing less and less friend like? please send me a message it would be awfuly helpful~Carly