dry rainy season -
as he starts to paint my room
it rains cats and dogs
A contest entry
- Short Lived Short Form #36 by Samplette.
1500 points, ended September 5, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A well crafted haiku. Paints a vivid picture as well. Thank you for entering the contest. Nice work.
Sam
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this is a great haiku! usually ppl make them boring but urs is fun

xoxo- christina

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Thanks so much, Christina!!
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ur welcome
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