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toothless smile (modern haiku)








toothless smile -
an infant and his grandma
offer a white rose






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Option: Purity

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    September 22, 2008
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    I like this!


  • Kappa Pyua
    September 22, 2008

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    I like how you connect pure innocense with purity. It's kinda hidden and almost mist the connection, which in away I think makes it a very god haiku indeed. thx for entering