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Star Struck

spellbound... light shown through,
sparkling diamond eyes filled me,

illumination overwhelmed my core,

flickering hope empowered my soul.

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I hope the background is considered legible. ♥

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    September 4, 2008

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    I know how you mean. It's amazing how something can blind you by it's beauty. Not always good though to fall so deep into something so tempting...


  • BehindTheShadow
    September 1, 2008
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    Nice job!