A fever burning hot
to touch shivering
sensations overwhelming
churning dizziness
drifting into fantasy.
Grasping respiration
travels down spine
trembling, wriggling
onward towards..
final thrust.
Author notes
25 words of wonder
A contest entry
- 25 Words of Wonder by xxRainbowDawnxx.
525 points, ended September 4, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very deep & as jaded stated, sensual. Brings forth eagerness and friskiness.
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Wow, very sensual, great job!
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hot!
what else?
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