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Weathering The Storm Together


though tempests swirl around you
wrought by nature's fury

remember, my love

the safest place
you will ever be

is in my heart...







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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    September 4, 2008

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    I can definately relate to this. I would like to think that someone I care for will realise that my heart is a safe place to be.
    Well said.

  • Lady Mak
    September 1, 2008
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    This is fantastic! loved this write!


  • BehindTheShadow
    September 1, 2008
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    This is wonderful!


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    SO BEAUTIFUL AND SOOTHING!!!

    Love does indeed come from deep in ones heart, it is there where it is kept strong and true.