Candlelight message
flicker nights doldrums
savage warmth into love
after cold chalk
scraped your skin
in hours of whipped
slavery by balding bosses
with PMS tendencies
A contest entry
- 25 Words of Wonder by xxRainbowDawnxx.
525 points, ended September 4, 2008, 23 entries
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Comments
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Very strong and vivid. I can kind of see an inner bitterness here.
We all have our pet peeves. -
"savage warmth into love
after cold chalk
scraped your skin"
Sweet Relief Indeed, Poet!
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