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Only Time Will Tell...

Your ecstatic happiness drives my mind crazy with fiery visions,
Your luscious liqueur tasting locks lure me into an alcoholic frenzy.
The beauty of your arrays send me sizzling like silver shining shooting sparkles,
Dark hallucinations and mysteries lurk behind the stars in your eyes
Drifting graciously between the barbed wire, keeping out unwanted plagues and presences
Agile and swift like a fox
Dazzled and dreamy, you enlighten my life
And arose the atmosphere in which every pair of eyes are set on you.

I have nightmares of those days when your delight will dwindle and decay away,
I toss and turn as those sweet, soulful eyes of yours scream selfishly,
Shutting themselves away from sizzling visions and summery spirits.
The day will end when our summer is over,
Will that day begin again when our autumn begins?
Will our delightful desires dwell or dwindle?

Only time will tell…

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Jodie (Pinkjodz)

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  • nevadapoet
    September 12, 2008
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    A very good write with great flow and imagery. Keep writing, you are very talented.
    Nevadapoet


  • fairytalelovestory
    September 8, 2008
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    great poem good luck


  • charmander13
    September 1, 2008
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    Hey this is great! I love your imagery and the lushness which you paint your love story by...


  • sora.
    September 1, 2008

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    luscious liqueur tasting locks?
    sizzling like silver shining shooting sparkles?
    o_0
    this gave me goosebumpsss!
    i love it!
    =D