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Orbital helix

Missing image
A galactic cluster twined
etched in amber glows.
A spiralling vortex with
a D and A flow

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13 Words Only

A contest entry

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  • TooRainbow silver member
    September 4, 2008
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    Vivid take on the prompt. Outstanding job--well deserved gold. Congrats!
    Sheryl


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    Both a briliant and original take on the prompt
    Nice flow for just a 13 word prompt
    Wish you the best in the contest
    take care
    David


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    Wow

    Sweet choice of words for only thirteen you picked them well. best of luck to you in the contest and out of the contest. Boog


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 2, 2008

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    How clever, unique and powerful
    Masterful take on the picture

    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Xianaria gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    this is really nice, i like the wording...the D & A part throws me, honestly, but the rest provides vibrant imagery. best wishes in the contest~


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    Clever
    love the way you took this one and indeed 13 words
    Best wishes in the contest hun
    Julie

  • Broken-Bones
    September 1, 2008

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    I really loved this especially the image created by the line "etched in amber glows". I also thought the final line was really clever. This was a wonderful take on the prompt and you created a lovely short piece. Great work x

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