You burn me with your pleasure and cries.
Loves aroma transcends into fueled drills.
Each bit takes me deeper, longing for you.
Endure a unique love-sizzle stung reward?
Survive the quintessence of fresh yearnings.
Enticed I crave your body bite in froth lust.
Tongue licks, stroke lips, crazy this hot mix.
Crush, grind and nip, these curves a love nix.
Melt my mouth, fire the chop as your move.
Watery in thy wetness I squirm to your kiss.
Timed luster green; persuasion stop in reds;
Signal fervor, swayed, hugs and sop for you.
In joy of your flesh, I quiver, gaze and moan.
Skin rubs, tweaked molds, pat battle cry hits.
Together we chatter to fume in love ecstasy,
Gorgeous hype: fresh drips, in awe real cute.
Blended or raw in your attire I covet to meet.
Bartered, as we smile, you stay alive for free.
Blush in temptation, expose my heart anew,
Spiced alliance, mature to see: my divine will.
Author notes
Option Two
A contest entry
- The Dark, The Dead, And the Hopelessly Romantic. by Demonic Beauty.
450 points, ended October 16, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Somebody out there has to be getting some sooooooo by jcat.
600 points, ended September 14, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - and love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A love feast for the holidays? Lol.
Thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest.
Novy & Brazos -
this is well written and it's emotional with a dark aura...I loved the flow of the read and the balance of deep thoughts.....excellent; thanks for sharing it...
novy
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unique word play
I give you a congrats on the silver and the subtlety of the piece. It is quite tasteful erotica.
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Humm...your immages are very rich and treated with a skill of wonderful poetic strength.....well done..and thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...
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I can sense a hearbeat rhythm in this only the speed changes as the fever rises.
Works for me.
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Quite, Explicit in places.. i thought.. but then again, im 14. xD.
Overall though, a good piece.
The vocabulary worked quite well.
But it was quite hard for me to read, because of the lack of a rhythm.
But, nevertheless, a good poem.
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Thanks for your comments
There is nothing explicit for you in this poem.
Hold a red chilly and bit it with food Soo-Sha and all rhythms walk away.
As you chew on the chilly you feel the saliva and mouth water etc. etc.
Now the funny point with all this you want it more and more in love.
Thanks you liked it I am grateful to you for it.
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