New things are growing
Things are changing
Things are becoming new
Feelings are shifting
Spirits are uplifting
Minds becoming anew
Emotions are stirring
Opinions are conflicting
Consciences are being wiped clean
Souls becoming renewed
No long misconstrued
They are now serene
The seasons are changing
Just like our internal seasons
Refreshing us for a new start
Author notes
I wrote this after a discussion we were having at school in class about how we go through seasons inside ourselves.
My names jenni (aka miss-princess) im 15 from australia. My fav animals are horses and dogs 
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I like your idea here, but I think you could have gotten more creative with it. Use imagery!!! Poetry has description, especially if you write freeverse! You are still young, though. Your writing WILL improve in time. Thank you for entering my contest, but this poem is not exactly what I was looking for.
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I think that this would make a great song!
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i loved this
very much so
i thought that it was amazing!!!
thank you so much
and good luck -
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i like it
who would you like to be in my ap family?
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I like this, I like the way it is written, it is very true and flows well! This is a very good poem!
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Very nice, indeed from time to time we go through seasons inside ourselves to change for the better or to clean things that we've left hanging.
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i like the rhyming at first..
then the way u sum it up in the end.
the same method i have been using in my poem, and ill tell u one thing, its the best.
great work.
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Yes, we do go through seasons inside ourselves! Your teacher is a smart cookie, and from your awesome write, I think that you are too! You must have been listening quite well in class, for you took what was said, and turned it into one stunning penning! It's VERY good!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
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This is very simple yet effective. I agree with how you sumed up the entire poem in the final stanza. It was a refreshing read.
Thanks for sharing.
Just one thing, I had to highlight the writing to read it. Any chance you could alter the contrast for future readers?
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