Missing you, tears shed, from eyes of blue
deep in mesmerized thought....
I look into your heart,
emblazoned with love's ecstasy.
Seeing your infectious smile radiating bright
like the stars above,
reflecting the beauty of shared perspicuousness.
Feeling the passions exuding from your soul
having been touched by mystical wonders;
{as we become one}
Indelibly tasting your unforgettable kisses, as though you're here,
reminiscent of many nigh's past;
{blending elements of spirits true}
Hearing faint whisperings spoken from your heart
expressions of pure admiration;
{I love you}
Thoughts of you never leave me,
{forever engraved}
mind, body, and soul.....
From the outside .... looking in,
you're never alone ~ within my heart.
You showed me how I could feel loved again
Author notes
PROMPT: (used 119 words)
contest image
if use a specific form - please identify it
less than 150 words
A contest entry
- Do What You Do Best by Errant Panther.
450 points, ended September 18, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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lovely expression and a deeply passionate write. very well done, perhaps though perspicuousness made that line stumble in flow a little.
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lucidity may have been a better choice after all - or some other word or phrase. thanx for comment and suggestions
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I don't think there is anything left to say! This is amazing and wonderful! What a great job you did on this one!
If this contest has not been judged, Best of luck to you!
Thanks for posting in the lionsloves lair!
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Wonderfully and beautifully written, sweet soul!
A joy to read!
Wishing you light and love,
Sandy -
You have done a great job on this poem.Love and the taste of new love to love again WONDEROUS
You did a great job on this poem.
Thanks for sharing and best of wishes to you.
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How romantic this is, so softly penned and beautifully worded. It is lovely. C
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This is very beautiful, with a style that is both romantic and intense. I like it, well done.
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This hits home quite closely! What a great write this one is! Speaks of everlasting, undying, unconditional love! A love that I know too. This is fantastic! Thanks for posting this in the Lair, or I would have missed it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Beautiful,
How you shine so brightly sis-star, you are a light in many souls path. Thanks for sharing such a wonderfully weaved piece. Much love and light back attcha, and all the best within this contest! Bravo!
Brother Timothy
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Oh My~
This one touches deep and Love the imagery also the emotions shared
The line: Thoughts of you never leave me
tugs hard and caresses the Heart!!
Excellent once again~
Keep that quill dancing Beautful
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Beautifully penned! A wonderful display of passion and love. Best of luck with this piece!
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