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wanting

He's sitting at home thinking about her
wanting to know if he is the one for her.
He thinks that he might not be getting though to her
with all the signals he's thowing out to her

He's pacing in his room wanting to see her
just seeing her face makes him think about how pretty she will look under the sarry night

He now called her and asked her the question hes been dying to ask
his heart reacing so fast
he can run a marathin in five minutes

after the conversation he has a smile on his face
knowing that she feels the same way about him

now when he looks at the stars he sees her
and the beatuiful soul they both have together
when they see eachother

He is now sleeping and dreaming about her
He cant be any happier
then the night he was sitting at home

Author notes

i know this is bad and it is jsut something in my mind that is all mixed up since its 2:15 am and i cant sleep
so you dont have to be to mean about it if its bad

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Comments

  • mangledDawn
    October 6, 2008
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    its very real i think
    a couple spelling oopsies, but great concept
    keep up the good work!


  • Glenn
    September 14, 2008

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    Hey, twlightlove its not a bad one for me!

    I read it and exactly felt the way I was thinking…………

    So somehow and somewhere this poem relates in someone’s life. It was a good poem rendering the emotions of living with the desire of love.






    ONE SEED can create a forest.
    ONE SMILE can start a relationship.
    ONE TOUCH can show love-n-care.







    Truly, I liked this poem.
    Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work.