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Descending

Missing image
An arduous spiral
Heading
Ever deeper
Into
The unknown
Damning me forever

Author notes

Picture Credit: http://bosniak.deviantart.com/art/Forever-Lost-54681896 (13 words)

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 2, 2008

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    Powerful word choice within this envokes deep imagery and thoughts

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    Thank You & Best of Luck!
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    ~Manda


  • maralisa silver member
    September 2, 2008
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    a brilliant take on the promt very deep and powerful in many ways good luck in the contest

  • Broken-Bones
    September 1, 2008

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    I thought this take on the prompt was wonderful, it seemed to really capture the picture and I also thought it really created the feeling of falling or heading downwards. Great work x