Life
wrought from
stumbling,
luck,
mistakes,
sound judgement,
brought me
to this place.
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture VI by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended September 4, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Brought you to this place ... moving imagery follows my mind around the stairs as I breathe in your words
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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a brilliant take on the promt full of the mixed emotions we encounter within our everyday life good luck in the contest
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I loved this, I can not pick out a favourite piece as I thought it all worked really well together. I loved the different things that you listed that have fashioned this life, I thought they really fitted together and accumulated. This was a wonderful thought so congratulations on a great piece which really got me thinking about the things which have got me to where I am. Nice Job x
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Wow, I like, too clever, too much meaning in a small package. --- Thank you.
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