Digest all the nails you couldn’t hold
Because babe, I really don’t care where you are && who your with
You keep on blowing feigned bubbles of trust
I’ll just keep bursting them with truthful threads
Until you open your taped-eyes && realize
This is not your game.
I don’t care who you love or who you date
Your ignorance doesn’t attract me
It makes me sick…
Of all the things I thought you could give
Headaches weren’t in the list.
Honestly I don’t know what you admire about me
[&& I still don’t know why you moon me still]
I don’t give a damn of the amount of time you ripped from me
I really don’t feel the pain at all...
Don’t admire my appeal of bravery
Deep inside my masquerade
I’m wishing to be as blind as you.
&& the thing I hate about you most is that
You never listened, you never cared
&& of all the lies you told
The one I truly loved was;
“I will always be there”
I guess I couldn’t resist the offer
After all I thought you were my knight in shining armor
Yes, I’ll keep on writing , I’ll keep on ranting
Because at least your lack of intelligence won’t
Allow you to discover I still want you [badly]
Babe, I don’t care what you do or what you hide;
You can keep on playing God, or trying to be a pimp
Ha! You make me sick! Baby you’re not even the perfect ten;
So *bunny* you && your lies,
Of all the things you said
The word I loved was
Goodbye….
Author notes
I hope this rant formula of mine doesn't make your contest stupid 
Im in block today and well still mourning an *bunny* 
anyways enjoy!
XXVampireeyesXX
In a list
A contest entry
- RANT!!! by written-in-ink.
1100 points, ended September 7, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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so this was what i wanted out this contest
this right here
this is honest and true emotion and i love it
i love it so much you ahev no idea!!!
i realate so much
thank you so much
and good luck -
Brilliant
Wonderful take on the prompt "Rant"
You write overflows with strong raw emotions
I love the following...
"Don’t admire my appeal of bravery
Deep inside my masquerade
I’m wishing to be as blind as you.
&& the thing I hate about you most is that
You never listened, you never cared
&& of all the lies you told
The one I truly loved was;
“I will always be there”"
Awesome choice of words
Wish you the best in the contest
Take care
David
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Dang. I would hate to be the poor schmuck on the recieving end of this vitriol. You have done a great job ranting. Best of luck in the contest.
Mike
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