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Spiral Shell Stairwell

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Spiraling down shell like,
Into Orange void,
Vertigo hike,
Curled like filmed celluloid.

 

 

 

 

Copyright:K:August 2008

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Allpoetry.com Contest
August 2008
Contest 13 Words Only for this Picture VI by PhantomsAngel87
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2419561
Picture Credit:

http://bosniak.deviantart.com/art/Forever-Lost-54681896
13 Words Only!
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Only rule is Please do not enter it another contest until
this one is over
Will close in a couple days
More Points Added at Close like always
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able to see your name.
* Closes in 13 days
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Picture Credit:
http://bosniak.deviantart.com/art/Forever-Lost-54681896

Picture Depicts Spiralling stairwell with vibrant orange and
crimson walls some in semi-darkness. Fascinating and
stunning photo very inspirational prompt, thanks!

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 2, 2008

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    Intruiging word use, very capturing to the reader

    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


    • Kazytc silver member
      September 2, 2008
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      Thanks millions and millions!

      Thanks millions and millions for the wonderful and kind review of my poem too you are so kind.
      Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience.
      Good luck in all of your contests hope you win Gold in them all!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX


  • maralisa silver member
    September 2, 2008
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    a brilliant take on the promt love the imagery and your background good luck in the contest

  • Broken-Bones
    September 1, 2008

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    I loved the way you tied the prompt in with the image of a shell and I liked the use of the orange shade to add a bit of colour to the poem. I had to look up the meaning of the celluloid and when I did I thought that your use of it was really interesting. Good work and Best wishes x

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 1, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience.
      Hope you win gold in every contest you enter, you well deserve to!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx

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