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Be Careful

There's more than one way,
to fall down for pity.

Results always splatter.

A contest entry

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 2, 2008

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    I actually smiled big at the end of this, cause the reality of truth is fantastic

    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • maralisa silver member
    September 2, 2008
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    a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    That they do bro!
    Deep take on that pic! And in only 13 words.. wow...

  • Broken-Bones
    September 1, 2008

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    I liked this, it seems like one of those thoughts that I brood over when I lose myself for a while in my pondering. I loved the last line, it ends the piece really well. Short, sweet and wonderful work x


  • BehindTheShadow
    August 31, 2008
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    I like this one best! Good luck.


  • Cannonsfire
    August 31, 2008
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    Ah yes and it does make a mess too

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