vertigo ventures
to dead-pan spaces
lacked of laughter
though bliss exists
rumor relates
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture VI by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended September 4, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like how you italized the last few words, gives a different sense to the poem!
Great take on the poem
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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a brilliant take on the promt full of great mixed emotions good luck in the contest
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I feel a bit of vertigo looking at that pic
.. never was good with heights lol
Another fab take!
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This was a really interesting and clever piece. My favourite line was probably "lacked of laughter", the way that you worded that was marvellous, it really created an image of a place where someone/something had actually taken all the laughter away and that was really powerful. Great work x
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Mmm can you have bliss despite a rumor??? lol Maybe
C
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