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suddenly, silently

it hurts a little
my body tightens
just at a touch
a brush of his fingertips

my fears become clearer
my insecurities shine
my heart races
when his eyes glance upon my face

I find myself smiling
when I see his grin
and staring endlessly
into his deep eyes

my head feels lighter
my looks seem adequete
my desire is rising
I wonder if he knows

I shake and quake
when we are apart
together I feel a strange comfort
then I know...

I love him

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  • Jenny84
    September 1, 2008

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    Nice job. Thank you for entering in to the contest. I like the way you put your emotions out there. good luck.